This comic is cute, but the rhyme scheme is horrendous. Too many extraneous words and cheap rhymes... not that it would be easy to fix. I think. Let me look again.
That was kind of the point, most existing Christmas songs use similar generic and corny rhyme schemes, so I tried to mimic the format.
Admittedly I initially wanted the pages/panels to be spread out more but due to time constraints Oppaiman had to compress it in fewer pages/panels. Either way thanks for the comment.
This comic is cute, but the rhyme scheme is horrendous. Too many extraneous words and cheap rhymes... not that it would be easy to fix. I think. Let me look again.
ReplyDeleteThat was kind of the point, most existing Christmas songs use similar generic and corny rhyme schemes, so I tried to mimic the format.
ReplyDeleteAdmittedly I initially wanted the pages/panels to be spread out more but due to time constraints Oppaiman had to compress it in fewer pages/panels. Either way thanks for the comment.